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alanajoli
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What are we doing right? What could we do better? Your feedback matters to our team–tell us what you think!

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You guys are doing great, as far as I'm concerned. Switching Rich and Anthony around to where Anthony's doing the story and Rich is doing the microrecorders was a great move.

While it looked great having Rich do the panel-to-panel stuff and Anthony doing the microrecorder illustrations, I actually like them better reversed–and I didn't even realize that until they switched. Anthony's style is great for the sequentials–I really like the flow he sets up. Rich's style adds extra weight to the still illustrations for the microrecorders.

I always talk about the art and the artists, and then forget to talk about the story. I'm an artist, so it's what I notice first. And most. However!

Alana's doing some great research into this story! I've spent my life moving all around the southwest and the northwest, and it's usually painfully obvious that a writer of a western story has never set foot in the southwest. East Coast types especially–it's just too much of a different culture, and borrowing from old cowboy movies to write a western story isn't always the best way to go.

Alana's got me convinced that she's actually wandered around down here in my neck of the woods (er, "desert"), and that's no mean feat. When you want to visit Tombstone, let me know! I have a spare bedroom, and it's only a few hours away from my house. :)

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Thanks for the awesome compliments, Adam. If I ever do get down to Tombstone, I will definitely let you know!

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FInaly this thread served a purpose! thnaks alot seriously. It gives me a good drive to go on further.

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