666 Apricots

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on Aug. 10, 2008

End Chapter 1

Crappy action lines. Don't look, they'll blind you!

Yeah, I know, short chapter. Hopefully they'll lengthen as we go. It was supposed to be longer at the beginning, but I decided not to re-do the whole beginning, for your sake :)

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