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Ep. 1 Page 9

Abt_Nihil

on Aug. 15, 2007

Again, you can probably see that here I was still experimenting with the toning. (In case you're wondering why I'm always writing in past tense: I've been working constantly on this series for the past six years, right now I'm working on the script for episode 6, eps. 1 and 2 were drawn over the past year.)

A bit of making-of info: The script on this first episode was pretty tight, concerning the dialogue… but little things and scene transitions were worked out right on the page, like Mr Motes taking his headache pill here.

EDIT:
Midge28: You're right… I'm using atmospheric images (the door opening, the pill in the glass) to indicate scene changes, but it's far from obvious. Still I've always been hesitant to use text bars indicating the location… I'm trying to get a hang of that.