So… you can see there's no big secret behind the helicopter, Mr Motes used it so he could get where Naomi crash-landed. His taking her to school is part of Naomi's "condition" from last page, but that will be revealed another time. For now this concludes the pilot, which establishes some sort of status quo to be explored in future episodes.
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TheMidge28: So that's what you'd call romantic? ^__^ I'm sorry that the 1st panel is confusing, it didn't even occur to me that it could like she was leaving… she's been taken from where she crash-landed to school, so she's exiting the helicopter. And I also didn't realize that dark haired girls are supposed to be evil, lol… just wait and see, you'll get to know her better soon. As to your 2nd comment, thanks for the suggestion, I try to stay within 22 pages though… I'll think about it. Fitz: Seems like I already commented on your concerns above ^^ And no catfights in the foreseeable future, sorry. I could do a pin-up of that, of course ^__^ DAJB: You'd all like to see that, don't you? :-P And you think she's no competition? Just wait and see… Thanks!
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