The first speech bubble is an example of how I rewrote the old dialogue, the original line was just "We're looking for an anomaly etc.". When I drew episode 3 the whole Park/orb thing was still very sketchy. Calling the scientist behind it all "Park" was a short-term decision too, influenced by someone I met shortly before starting to write ep. 1.
And from here on I think I really got the hang of how to tone my pages. In my eyes it greatly enhances the original page… you should put this one through photoshop's threshold filter to see what it looked like without toning ^^
EDIT:
TheMidge28: Sorry for the confusion… only the first two pages are flashbacks, the rest is happening in "the present" (if you can call 1997 the present). There will be several flashbacks in this storyline, and it will not always be clear which happen when… only when all the clues are together should it become clear. But until then, you could place everything not involving the boy from the first pages of this episode in the present. And as to what's depicted in the 5th panel… it's a secret! ^^ Thanks for the compliments! DAJB: It's fine as long as there are no tentacles in your comic ;-D Fitz: The mystery will deepen a bit more ^^ Rockster1039: Thanks! Nepath: Yup, I think so too.
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