Now this is where I went a bit overboard with the amount of panels per page. Other writers/artists would have probably split this into three pages. Unlike Chris Ware though… whom I didn't know yet when I made this page ^^;
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Fitz: Thanks, and the elevator panel is one of my favorites too… it leads the reader's eyes up again ^^ Midge: As always you're completely right, I remember that I actually did notice that and changed the balloon tail once… so I guess I just uploaded the wrong image here. I'll go looking for the right one… :-D The transition is kinda quick, in my mind these jump cuts have a sort of comedic effect… like he suddenly pops up in a completely different place. These are storytelling issues I'm still trying to figure out, so thanks go to your heightened analytical powers! The idea is that Jack goes to the lab first, then Doc Kim sends him up again to his office. Thanks for the compliments, art-wise I kinda like this page too ^^ Oh, and the fact that you can't even use the elevator without the card kind of renders some security superfluous. But yeah, we'll delve into the security issue another time. DAJB: Thanks!
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