A Murder of Two

Prologue - Pg 13 (Temporary)

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Prologue - Pg 13 (Temporary)

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This is just ugly linework and will be toned and such appropriately.. later today. I'm not up to it tonight, sorry. n__x;

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  • Jabali at

    love it anyway.

  • Free write at

    ahh bird guts this time!

  • Fitz at

    Great job on the eyes in the first panel, very expressive.

  • Malachite Maenad at

    Your art is beautiful!

  • Kristen Gudsnuk at

    btw I don't think the linework is ugly, quite on the contrary, I love it!!
    however, in the fourth panel I think maybe you should make him look a little more frightened… there seems to be less emotion on his face there than in other frames..
    sorry..!! I think it looks great though, and you don't even have to change that!!! *hugs page*
    great job!

  • Kristen Gudsnuk at

    *cries* the crows!!! ;_; stupid farmers!!

  • Niona at

    i thought it was all good cep box one.. o.o

  • oneminutecomics at

    yeah, I remember this. Been so long since I saw this. Still has some of the best lineart on the Duck. I#m happy to see you're updating as slowly as me :D

  • jonmkl at

    wow this is really interesting, I'm definitely gonna follow this one.

  • Azaeziel at

    Your line art looks great. Poor crows, but that is what farmers do sometimes. The sad truth of life…

  • Annhialator at

    I really like your compositions ..although is it just me or am I seeing brain parts on the 5th panel?…might probably be me

  • Darwin at

    I was gonna say…I love the linework but I really like the toned pages!

  • reconjsh at

    sweet page boss.

  • Locoma at

    I wouln't call that an ugly linework :-D
    can't wait to read more, the story is getting very interesting

  • Thirdperiodlunch at

    Eeep!

  • Allan at

    Oh man, that is so sad!

  • Willowanderer at

    I like seeing your linework. it makes life diffrent and neat.

  • LanceDanger at

    Ouch! Poor crows :(

  • PinkBunny at

    NO!!! BIRDIES!! *sobs hysterically*

    At least the main one hasn't died.

  • Persephone at

    Poor Crows…
    I really do hate people sometimes, so very heartless.

  • theorah at

    Very nice perspective in the firsrt panel,. it really emphasizes the emotion perfectly :)

  • JillyFoo at

    Noooooooooooooooooos!

  • emjee at

    …I can see his brain!

  • Laeluu at

    D:< KILL ZE' FARMER.

  • Razzy Jazz at

    aww…

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