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Page 40 - I wonder if everything else on her is real?

Alaina Prana

on June 7, 2009

Well guys sorry for the late update today. We did manage to get it out as promised though :D

Sorry im the one updating again. Alaina gets her laptop in a couple weeks so she should be the one talking. Currently right now were on summer break i have a few classes this quarter but Alaina will be taking the summer off to work.

I have written more to the script and i have mixed feelings with it myself. Although this is supposed to be a fantasy comedy-drama i am not sure what kind of humor i really want to be using. Most modern day comedy uses several things; slapstick, puns, and sexual tension. Currently right now we are focusing more on the first two. Later in the script i wrote some pages with sexual tension humor but i dont know if i really want to persue that…You guys are the fans do you think this comic would improve or get worse (like how can it?) with that kind of humor?

anyway i enjoy honest comments even if they are hurtful. Our comic can only improve (hopefully). Enjoy today's page.