Afterworld Part I
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Prologue #5 [3/27/06]
Dan onUnedited version (It says "Wrong arm =(" at the top)
Okay, this is probably the only page that nearly pissed me off. I don't know what happened; it looked easy, finished sketching, looked over for any errors, and after inking it I see all these errors everywhere. The most noticable one would be between panels 1-3. Moto's left arm was hanging onto the gun and then it mysteriously switches to his right arm.
And then I pretty much screwed up the dialogue, too.
Seriously unhappy. =(
EDIT: Damn it, I forgot to set the live date to tomorrow. What a horrible way to start my week before Spring break.
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