Air Raid Robertson

The Sunshine Fascists Part 6

on Sept. 29, 2010

There will be one or two more pages to the storyline following this one. I haven't hammered out the details yet, but at the moment I am leaning towards two.

I'm a little iffy about this page as a whole. I don't think it's very approachable to the new reader. Yes, it's towards the end of the arc, but I always draft these pages with the thought that this will be somebody's first page of Air Raid Robertson ever. That's why I do the little recaps on every first panel. I want every page to be a jumping-on point.

I don't think I pulled that off here. Plus, this page could've used more jokes. I think the illustration aspect of it looks okay though.

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