Air Raid Robertson

Dames, Danger, and Dissonance Page 8

on June 17, 2011

I'm not too enthusiastic about this page. There isn't much transition between the panels and the character figures don't really pop out too much. Sure, it's a talking sequence, but I've visually framed dialogue better than this.

However, this page does set up an incoming fight scene that I believe will have quite a bit of razzle-dazzle in its step. That segment will bring us nicely into the latter half of this story.

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