Air Raid Robertson

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My Hurricane Life Page 3

Air Raid Robertson

on Sept. 8, 2011

I'm much less happy with this page than the previous two. I think it looks a bit stilted and bland while pages one and two had interesting things to look at and better panel structuring.
Sure, this part is a talking heads sequence that is needed to move a plot along. However, there are plenty of comics artists that can do conversational scenes that pack just as much impact as a fight sequence. It bothers me that I have yet to gain the ability to add myself to their august ranks.
I won't get a chance to try again soon though. The next page showcases an aerial battle,