Air Raid Robertson

Author notes

Plain Gold Ring Page 6

Air Raid Robertson

on Oct. 25, 2011

This is one of those pages that changed considerably from its layout stage to its final form. For one thing, I had intended to reveal The Phantom's visage on this page. I also wanted to include some of the follow-up to this reveal.
However, I then decided to squeeze in that crack about Stockholm Syndrome from Air Raid Robertson. This pushed the rest of the stuff back a bit. And, well, I then thought that it would lend more tension if I held back on showing the reader Erik's face until the following page.
So, things got a bit more decompressed than it started out as. For the most part I think it works.