Air Raid Robertson

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Plain Gold Ring Page 9

Air Raid Robertson

on Nov. 17, 2011

I have once again done an Air Raid Robertson page with no gags or jokes. And yes, I'm still not entirely comfortable with that. I think we all know that comedic comics tend to fall flat on their faces when they attempt to do "serious material". I'm treading some dangerous ground with some of this material.
For the most part, however, I think I'm doing okay with the script. I'm mostly worried about the art. I think I used far too many dark tones for the early pages of this story. I lightened up a bit for this section and I think it looks considerably better.
The climactic showdown between Christine and Erik is on page ten. At the moment I think page eleven will wrap up the story, but I might want to add something in at the last minute.