Ambrosia Syndrome

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CatCatDragoo

on April 18, 2009

-sleep deprived notes . read at own risk-

Heh, I lied. ;w; I like coloring with my pencil. It feels good to use traditional media, rather than digital media. Of course, I did tweek the contrast, brightness, and monotone levels, plus cleaned up the border ((they were so messy xD; ))
… Okay, when I point out so many tweeks it suddenly doesn't sound so traditional… ;w;

UH! Anyway, I have to say this… It's not my most favorite page. It's not the worst page either, just…
Hmh… I don't like the proportions, positioning, precision, accuracy…
Lots of stuff. ;n;
And I realize the backgrounds are kinda lame, but…
You see, I live in the county. I don't know what it's like(or more to the point, what it looks like) to have buildings surrounding a school (with the exception of the surrounding school wings). But boy those horizons and clear skies sure are pretty though… :3

I do, however, think I did an acceptable job with the prespective in that last pannel. :3
And I absolutely love Eilir's expressions.
But his hands and forearms are too big, his legs are positioned weirdly, and Kane's stomach muscles are still retarded. :3
-constructive criticism-
*nods* Yes, I put myself down so I can pin-point my flaws and where I need improvement in.
Which is everything.
Because there's no such thing as perfection, just close enough!
And though I strive to perfect my art, I know this is impossible, yet still I try on.
For you! Understand? :3

-is far too mellow when sleep deprived-