Well, here is the first glimpse of our female protagonist as she looks at an old photo that is also part of the set up to the whole plot.
At first when writing this part, I was debating if I should have her do narration like Brandon does, but then decided it would be better not to and have her be introduced like how we will see her in the coming pages.
I have to hand it to Howard on the job he did in particular with the background in the photo as I had nothing behind the people in it before he added the cool detailing there.
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