Angelfish

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Luminous

on Oct. 2, 2008

By the way, I hope everyone remembers this guy on this page and the last one. :) If you need a refresher, just hop on back to page four.

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@usedbooks and amanda - Thanks for the feedback! I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind for the next crowd scene… And in the third chapter, there will be a lot of crowd scenes.

@BlkKnight - That's what I was going for :)

@ghostrunner & brogan - Thanks!