Angelfish A COV comic

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Issue 9, Page 4

Masq

on Feb. 12, 2009

My beta-editor watched me make this page. He said he liked it, and made a couple of suggestions right there with me. That was kinda cool.

On the third panel, I had both the exclamation point and a thought bubble near it that read "…wait…" My editor said that this is a great moment, but the third panel didn't need the extra narrative. So I asked "well, should I keep the thought bubble or the exclamation point?" He said the exclamation point. Good call, I think.