I know Pascual, the last panel is different than what I sent you in the script. But I wasn't really impressed with his line. I felt better if I changed it and added in a little thing called vocabulary and a hook.
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oldguy: I guess I should look out for that more closely now.
khard12: Or when he isn't afraid of huge-ass guns. That's a good sign to start running.
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