On this page the script called for a word balloon that simply had "…" and honestly that punctuation drives me crazy! I admit to using it but I try not to use it often, and when I do use it I generally throw it in with actual dialogue. I stuck to the script anyway. Overall I think this page cements the timid nature of the character quite well. If I could do it again though I wish that I didn't make her waist so tiny and her boobs so huge.
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