I know that the story has been very uneventful, but I'm hoping that it'll actually pick up after this past chapter…and since my computer's messed up its taking me ages to tone and finish the pages.
Let me know what you think up to this point and if you have any pointers for improvement, comments or complaints. Anythings welcome. Thanks.
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