Articles of the Broken Promise
Page 12 - OUTTAKE: Rejected Page Issue 1

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Page 12 - OUTTAKE: Rejected Page Issue 1

PBandJ
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This was the original end page/panel for issue #1. I received some very useful feedback and lost the silly sound effect. You can also see a bit of the original uniforms I was going to use in the upper left panel.
Enjoy!

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