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Invasion Of The Unspeakable Filth, Part 2

Peitho

on Oct. 30, 2006

2 of 3. Laura takes charge.

Laura's quite neurotic and tends to be more social and "girly" than Dianne, but she's always able to sally forth when the situation calls for someone to take charge. In retrospect, I kind of wish I'd done this mini-arc later, so that her take-charge attitude came as more of a surprise. As it is, I feel like her neurotic tendancies betray this early characterization of her later down the line. Plus Dianne, the more easy-going of the two, comes across as anxious and a wuss.

But meh.

I totally ruined it for you by criticizing it, I know. I hope I spoiled it like old milk in the fridge.