BK Shadow Nemesis

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kyupol

on May 29, 2007

Man I cant believe for the past couple days I've been writing this story like mad. Every single time I get a chance to access a computer, I just write "Servus Dei/Serviam". I have a feeling its gonna be another long story (but maybe shorter than this Brood Knight series)

Here are some excerpts from the "Servus Dei/ Serviam" story I have so far…

ENJOY THE PREVIEW!!!:

EXCERPT 1
Devil: Dont worry General. This tragedy will never happen again.
General: What are you gonna do about this?

Devil: Just trust me, General. I promise you. The ultimate victory in Iraq is going to be yours. If you decide to follow my strategy, there will be no more terrorism. Your enemies will tremble in fear. Think about it. Kim Jong Il and the Iranian ayatollahs will surrender to the might of the United States! Without firing a single shot. Without a single casualty.

General: Bullshit! Even with technological superiority, these fuckin insurgents are getting bolder and bolder everyday! Killing my soldiers little by little! What the fuck exactly is that strategy of yours?!?

Devil: So are you willing to give my strategy a chance? You have nothing to lose.

General: Um… I guess I'd give your… "strategy" a try…

EXCERPT 2
?????: Um… I remember one thing though. When we were given a short story writing assignment, I wrote a story. I remember not noticing the time as I finished writing my story. I guess I mustve liked writing stories.

But Miss… The teacher got mad at me and went to see my parents just because I wrote a story about a guy who shot up his school. I was sent to the principal's office as if I did something wrong. How sure are you that writing can be made into a career if people dont like what you write and get you in trouble for it? Why did the teacher react like that to an essay?

GC: ?????. You have to understand. The reason why your teacher did that, is because of recent events. You know… tragedies like Columbine, Red Lake, Dawson College, Virginia Tech… could have been prevented with the proper intervention of the school staff.

EXCERPT 3
LD: Also dont forget that in the rich materialistic culture of the West, the children of the immigrants are more likely to tread down the path of materialsim and shallowness.
You see, my plan to fuck up the human race will succeed even if the doctrine of diversity and political correctness become perfected. Even if a new breed of political correctness will rise up that doesn't discriminate the formerly dominant: the males and the white.
Sure sure. You have an utopian diversity going on. People of all races and creeds will be together. However, I've seen a weakness in humanity that is very fun to exploit.

Demon1: What is that?

(*To _____ *)
Dad: Im the one working full time here! Im the one paying the bills in this house and working 10 hours a day in a shit factory job!
And you still have the audacity to shoot off your mouth like that in front of me?
You have no respect for me! We've only been in Canada for a few years and youre starting to act up like the white women and their feminism and their sense of entitlement!
I dont see anything good that is coming from our migration to Canada! Fuck the Philippine consulate and Canadian embassy who sold this idea to us! Fuck I feel so stupid! FUUUUUUCKKKKK!!!!!!!! THIS BULLSHIT!

(*Dad looks at _____*)
Dad: And you! the fuck are you lookin at? You gonna be a gangsta yo? I know what will happen to you in the future!
Youd be like one of those young Filipino men I see in the bus who dress up like black people and act like theyre the gangsta yo!!! YO YO YO YO!!!! FUCK!!! IMA MOFUCKING GENGSTA FLO YO YO YO!!! (*sarcasm*)
And then what? You now feel sorry for _____ cuz I slapped her?!? Just because she's a woman?!? You and your fucking sense of chivalry! You are a fucking pussy, _____! You are growing up to be a fucking pussy!!!
FUCK THIS PLACE!!!

(*Camera focuses on the american soldier in the background.*)

FS: Wow! That is really… microscopic. Ahahahahahhaa!!! Now tell me Mr. Taliban, do you have a wife back home? Well dont worry about her, she already left you. I couldnt blame her actually. Like how the fuck can you please your wife with… that?!?

Taliban: AAGGGGHHHH!!!!! NO!!! STOP!!! NO TOUCH THAT!!!

FS: Awww… The poor Taliban baby is crying… Want some milk huh?!? Want some milk?!? How bout the milk from the guy beside you?!? And to get that milk, you must get down on your knees and face him. DOWN!!! ON YOUR KNEES!!! GET THE FUCK DOWN ON YOUR KNEES!!!

(*Closes in on the face of the american soldier in the bg. The soldier looks shocked. Sweat trickling down his face. This whole torturing the Taliban is just BG dialog. No images of this sick ritual. *)