BK Shattered Hate

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kyupol

on Feb. 2, 2006

I've been working on [Shadow Nemesis] lately. I kinda got really hooked up to it that I've put off video games, social life, and a few hours of work. .. at least I could hit the quota for the day I'm fine.

As far as [Shadow Nemesis] is concerned, I'm gonna try improve the following things:


1)DIALOGUE - Yeah. People complain about my dialogue ever since I went on drunkduck. English isnt my first language but ill try my best. I'm improving on it though after being in Canada for 5 years already.

I'm goin it over and over again and trying as much as possible to take out the inconsistensies… like Mara-Nina saying some statements that sound too "intelligent" for her level. She isnt an idiot, nor is she a genius. On a scale of 0-5 with 0 being an idiot and 5 being einstein, she's probably a 2. So her language should be simplified as possible. Words that most people need to look into a dictionary for… are a no-no for her. She's basically a blue-haired, more violent, hornier, dumber version of Claudita.



2) STORY - Its gonna have more characters than [shattered hate]. This thing is probably gonna be more than 20 chapters. And possibly, I'm gonna divide it into different "ACTS" consisting of a few chapters in them. I'll also try my best to make it a bit different and better than [shattered hate]. There's still gonna be angst and drama whether you like it or not. And a little politics explained by Mara-Nina… which is a bit hard to do cuz politics requires dictionary words. All those long-winding essays on the internet about politics are sometimes just too hard to understand.


3) ART - ill try… but for sure its impossible to please everyone at my level of art. Its not gonna be like PINKY TA or any of those full-colored comics here…

And yes. I am head over heels with motion blurs. I'm in love with motion blurs. I'm not gonna let go of that whether you like em or not.



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In other news, check out the new review thread of this comic:


http://www.drunkduck.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=848