-The text balloons in the middle panel aren't really in the right order. I had no idea how I could fix this, so you'll get some mingled up dialogues in there. (Try to read them in this order: left-right-left-right-right-left). I'll try to avoid these confusing things next time. - I really don't like Slitving's profile in the last panel. Somehow I had more difficulties drawing this page than I had with the others. - The watermark font is different because I drew this page on my home computer instead of my laptop, and both pc's have different fonts installed on them. - When I wrote this story I was 16 and heavily influenced by webcomics. The idea of 'eternal life in death' actually came from the comic Vampire Phantasm (http://www.vermillionworks.com/vp), and I'd just like to say thanks to the writer for coming up with that (or maybe she got it out of a book as well ^^). Anyways, throws a different light on the whole vampire idea, no?
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