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DoctorSharktopus

on Nov. 20, 2015

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Transmorpher D.D.S.: Jenna gets very wordy when she's letting herself go like this. It's something I kind of noticed in a lot of hentai, where characters have a habit of just ranting as they have sex, or describing out loud what they're doing and describing the feelings or whatever. It's something that I can appreciate, to a degree… it can help add an extra element and can oddly be a way to immerse readers in the story. But it also has the risk of pulling them out just as much because of how unrealistic it is. So I think making it just kind of a weird habit specific to Jenna works since that way it's more of a character trait than just an oddity about the writing.