Battle of the Robofemoids
Issue 3 page 4

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Issue 3 page 4

bravo1102
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I keep tweaking and tweaking the speech balloons. It's proving hard to get in all the dialogue and for the page not to look cluttered.

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  • bravo1102 at

    In the original script there were some Buffy the Vampire Slayer references but they just got in the way.

  • Jamie59 at

    Careful she bites!

  • El Cid at

    LoL! It's good to know at least that the manga character knows she looks weird! This page isn't really cluttered, but what I find is that, when the page is getting too cluttered, that means I should split it up into two pages to give more "breathing room" (not that I actually take my own advice, ever!)

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