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laundry room page 5

bravo1102

on June 18, 2020

There's actually a one page buffer. Getting into the swing of things slowly, but there are massive rewrites between the script and the finished page.
Dialogue just never works from the script to behind the camera and then to the panels and page.

If I am going to disassemble a cigarette package, scan it, reduce it to 1/6 scale and print and put it together, you bet someone is going to smoke. But of course you don't smoke around film and cameras so Joyce is trying to get away– but seems Suzi doesn't bother answering.

Remember before Trisha wanted more cleavage and now–

And I had to get Jerrie out of the way before some of the craziness to come.

But he has his ways to stalk without necessarily being there.