Benders and Brawlers

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Raging Waters (Redux)

GeneralNerd

on March 27, 2009

This isn't one of my favorites; I know what Katie is mad about but what she says doesn't strike me as exactly right. Close, but not right.

I've hit my first language issue, and I'm wondering if this is enough to change the rating to T. It's probably going to happen at some point, what with all the bloodless violence Avatar is known for, and my own tendencies to use adult language (which is only when appropriate). I probably won't do it now but possibly in the future.

Also, when the GM asks you a question like that, you better pay attention.

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Redux Notes: In hindsight, the dialogue wasn't that bad, especially after a few minor alterations. Also, the language issue has been removed. It's not self-censoring; it's more about the rhythm of the dialogue.