Bulletproof
Issue 2 Page 11

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Issue 2 Page 11

spacehamster
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Okay, so apparently it wasn't clear what happened on page 10… sigh.

Her superpower is that she can turn herself intangible and invisible. I thought the caption in panel 2 was enough to explain that, but I guess I thought wrong. So when the archers shot at her, she just turned herself intangible for a split second and the arrows went through her. Hence why she doesn't have, y'know, arrows sticking out of her on this page now. Heh.

I guess it would've helped if I'd added a caption on that last panel to explain what was going on, but I thought it wasn't necessary, and I tend to err on the side of not over-explaining things. But this is why being on this site is good because I get feedback and I learn what works and what doesn't. Yep.

So let me know what I @#$&ed up this time. ;-)

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