You know, it's funny. Some pages, you draw them, you scan them, and they're practically good to go. Others… you scan, you look at them on the computer, and all of a sudden, you notice a million things you don't like and end up laboring over for another couple of hours. Like this one. And there's still stuff I'm not happy with. But if I don't leave it alone now I'm going to drop off schedule, and with more or less no buffer… that's not a good idea.
Oh, by the way, the big fugly's name is Widowmaker, and Tarantula will address him as such on the next page. I always have a hard time coming up with dialogue that names the characters when they appear without it feeling too forced. It was easy enough having Hornet introduce himself and Firewing on page 3, but when it's two supercriminals on a hit and they're not even in the same room, it's difficult. "Good evening, sir. My name is Tarantula, and my associate standing guard in the smokefilled hallway outside is Widowmaker. I am going to kill you with this knife now to ensure my employers' takeover of your territory."
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