Chaos and Order

Chapter One Page Nine

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Chapter One Page Nine

Jase
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Redeux page. Looks much better now!

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  • Avie at

    Looking forward to reading more !

  • Jase at

    Top web-
    http://topwebcomics.com/vote/8994/default.aspx

  • Jase at

    Perspective switching, yes. :) I'm glad it's not confusing.

    Also, the caped guy's also in the background of the zoomed out page when we saw the argument for the first time (page, ahhh… Seven.) He's just watching so far, but he's sort of stood between them, so I wanted to put him in.
    As for WHO he is- well. That'd be a spoiler. xD

    As for top web- I certaintly can, although there's so few people voting I'm not sure it's worth it. xD I'll do that in the morning though. It's very late here.

    (By the way, you can't tell without colour, but the beaded headpiece is braided hair. xP He's also on page seven.)

  • bryterlayter at

    Will you post a link so that it's easier to vote for you on top web?

  • bryterlayter at

    who's that caped person (4th panel, background)?

    If i'm not mistaken you're switching different perspectives, from vantage point to vantage point. Or it's rotating a bit, as evidenced by the guy with the beaded headpiece. I feel like in the next scene the camara might pan out to show the expanded fight scene.
    I like it even without the color because you've got details on the people to help us tell them apart.

  • taradaga at

    Whoa ho! Very cool. I love their costume/hair designs.

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