Ok! Updating on time first thing in the morning for a change. Go me!
*cough*
Ok then, so I'm jumping a little in time between panels, but it's kind of hard to draw someone drinking, putting the cup down, lying down, and then passing out without it looking really boring, so this is what I went with. You get the idea.
Just a few notes. The first panel? You see that hand? That's supposed to be the doctor. I'm hoping people will get that without reading this, but I figured I should point it out just in case. I tried drawing a panel of him handing Kishandren the cup, but it was so horrid I had to scrap it.
And hey look! Blanket texture! Cup texture! I'm trying to add some more texture into the comic to make it interesting. I wanted the cup to look rough and ditto for the blanket.
Jiken there was supposed to be on page 09, but I decided to shove him in here as the panel fit. I just…truncated his dialogue a bit.
Aaaand this is the last page for now with blood in it. Hurray! Next time it shows up I'll try to make it more consistent.
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