Children of the Tiger

Author notes

Chapter 08 page 02

purenightshade

on Feb. 24, 2010

Watching: Roswell
Playing: Kingdom Hearts 2
Reading: Foundation by Mercedes Lackey
Listening to: Ticket to Heaven – 3 Doors Down

I didn’t realize until this morning that I messed up this page. There’s a line of dialog that isn’t there and the rest of the page doesn’t make much sense without it. I’m sure, based on what else is going on, that you could figure it out. I got the page edited, but unfortunately it made the first panel look a little crowded. Sorry for that.

What I like: I’m rather fond of the expression on Aldiara’s face in panel 1

What I don’t like: crowded text, and the fact that the soldier in panel three looks overly feminine.