Crimson Dark

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Chapter 02: Page 30

theleast

on Dec. 17, 2006

Sigh, there's been something lacking in the art for this chapter and I'm not sure what it is. While it's technically superior to chapter 1 because I've been developing new techniques and procedures, it lacks some of the artistry of my earlier pages. I fear laziness may be a factor, plus impatience impatience. The story hasn't been as strong as I hoped it would be either. Frankly, I'm a bit disappointed with how Chapter 2 is turning out. However, it is now nearing it's end so I'm going to make sure that I learn from my mistakes and make Chapter 3 as good as humanly possible.