Crimson Dark

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Chapter 02: Page 31

theleast

on Dec. 21, 2006

I think I must have rewritten today's page a dozen times. T'was quite a challenge.

Thanks to everyone who has said nice things following my moderately angsty rant on Monday, and thanks to people who have made helpful suggestions too. A good friend, Samuel, wisely pointed out that part of the problem may simply be the time of year - my depression invariably gets worse in December/January - and that does tend to impact on everything I do. But another good friend (my Mum) pointed out that Chapter 2 has primarily consisted of "talking heads", relieved only by a flashback space battle, which is a fair point. Trust me, Chapter 3 is going to be better.

For those of you who don't frequent the forum, I suggest you at least check this out: Reg is building a Kestrel fighter out of cardboard!

Also, I've added some buttons below my favourites list, provided by Project Wonderful. At the moment there's only been a couple of bids, so there's a good chance you can get a bit of free advertising if you place a bid right away!

There will be a new page on Monday as usual, and it won't be Christmas-themed - there's probably going to be more than enough of that happening as it is :)