Crimson Shifters

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Chapter 1: Page 4

KamiDaHobo

on July 28, 2007

So, we finally have a name for our "main" character: David Avalon.
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This was a tough page, for a few reasons.

From a narrative perspective, how do you make general dialogue interesting? I tried to be a bit dynamic with the last panel, simply for that reason.

From a personal standpoint, I'm still trying to find a style that's simple, effective, but most importantly, interesting to look at. This page is a bit more 'line heavy' than the previous, and I'm not sure how I enjoy it. It makes the pages easier to make, sure, but I'm wondering how you all feel about it.

Definitely let me know, as I'm in a state of confusion about it. Also, having exposed nerve endings in my tooth (and not having insurance to go to the dentist) isn't a good thing to have while creating a page of a comic. :P

Thanks for reading my long rant, I'll see you all on the 5th of August!