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Chapter 7, Page 21

Neilsama

on Jan. 11, 2010

(Note: Pages 20 and 21 were originally published in reverse order and are now switched back to their intended chronology.)

Hey, I'll be commenting all this week. At some point in the future, Al will be commenting on some of my pages.

Ultra, Lightbringer, and Debbie are in big trouble, but Lisa and Io are working as fast as they can. Meanwhile, Lorelei sees a problem that needs fixing with her trusty 1-7/16 Snap-On wrench. (Where did that come from? I don't know.) Remember, Lor, that's righty-tighty, lefty-breaky. And above all, don't forget your safety goggles.

Hey, what are Dasien and Green Avenger doing in that security window? I assure you, it's not what it appears to be. This is a family show.

When we cut back to our heroines, you'll see what move Abby is setting Dasien up for.

See you guys tomorrow and again on Thursday! Y'all come back, now.