The pickle was, if I choose a third person, all-knowing narrator, then the narrator needs to be cold and objective. Needs to have zero emotion. Can't throw in any quips, because if he does, then who is this guy? Are we supposed to know him? But we don’t know him. And I hated not being able to throw in quips!
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