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502 Adolescence Trial and Error: End

JillyFoo

on May 19, 2011

At last the ending of the chapter AND… the end to Demon Eater Book 3!

So what do you think of chapters 16 "Living it Another Way" through the end of this chapter "Adolescence Trial and Error"? Think that arc is worthy of a book? Would the story make sense by itself?

This arc..it was so weird… I wasn't sure what people would think of it. I didn't want to be offensive even though I worried it was really close to that.

The weight gain and throwing up part I really didn't mean for it to look like that. I was thinking it was the food that made him sick (like in chapter 8) vs wanting to lose weight. Actually Saturno didn't lose weight. When kids grow taller they gain weight so with Saturno growing taller it evens out. Little gain or loss.

My main idea was I wanted to show in this arc was how Saturno has changed slightly in character through this trial as well as physically. I think that when people are nice to you, you learn to be nicer back.

It will be interesting to see where this goes…