Din Krakatau

#24

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#24

Aurora Borealis
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This seemed like a good idea when working on it but right now I think I should have changed couple of things while working on the layout. For example I don't think it's clear enough that she wanted to swing the car at them and doors breaking off have sent the car at the other car. Also the fifth panel might be unclear: he's shielding the girl from impact with his own body.

Other than that the page is okay and I like how the coloring came out.

Next page April 28th

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