I had a bit different idea than what you can see here… originally the monster's shouts were going to go on top of the art and sort of separate the panels, but I noticed too late that if I do that it'll cut into the art too much. So I moved it UNDER the art. Still looks decent.
I don't know if the eye flowing out is clear enough, but other than that (and the usual "faces/heads" problem) this page looks okay :)
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