After three pages that I was quite happy with, I decided to take it up another notch, and spent a lot more time pencilling this one. Result, much sharper, tighter pencils (still pretty messy but that's ok). Some sound effect experiments on this one :)
I think the smoke/dust in the background came out looking a bit too much as if it were rocks, but I guess it works from the context of the previous page.
Took me quite a while to come up with a layout for this one and I was constantly changing it. While drawing one panel, I was totally redesigning the rest of the page until I came out with this.
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