Another pretty good page. I'm quite happy with the layout, despite breaking one of the rules (it should be the objects/characters closer to the camera sticking out of panel borders, not the ones further away) but it made sense at the time of drawing.
Other than the attack on the last panel, bad guys stick to the left side of the page, while Din is shown only on the right one. It creates interesting visual colunns :)
About Razorarm. As you can guess from the last two pages, I decided to avoid the stereotype of a large, dumb and slow opponent.
Comments
Please login to comment.
Login or Register${ comment.author }} at
${ comment.author }} at