Din Krakatau

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#60

Aurora Borealis

on July 17, 2008

All smooth again :)

Took me several attempts to figure out how the spider legs will go from this perspective. And it could still be improved. I think I got pretty close with the dust cloud on this one (that's what it is supposed to be), but the buildings look well… not really like buildings.

On the other hand the dust to ground gradient looks pretty good, just how I wanted it to look like.

Left leg on panel 3 should be drawn smaller, as it is it makes her right leg look a bit as if it was the left one, but I am really happy with how the right foot came out. The gun… well, let's say it resembles one, haha. It's supposed to be a magical gun or something like that anyway.

Oh yeah, biggest mistake on panel 2… her shoulder is TOO BIG. Maybe if I drew her hair/head larger it could work. Like this, she has bodybuilder-wide shoulders or something.

Next page: July 21st.