I don't like the flow of this page. Not at all. Plus, now I'm kinda wondering how to handle the ninja. It would be a perfect oppotunity to fit the War in and Koeluu fighting(with stabbin's), but it might be too soon for that. Can't have too much at once, y'know? I might just drop it and say "random ninja attacks happen all the time when you're a warrior race! Ninjas are no more than random, sneaky thugs/burglers!"
Oh, and as for the ninja…he was, like, "hiding in the shadows" so he was invisible. Y'see, his lower body is not as defined as his upper, and when he got hit the spell was broken.
Favorite book: Count of Monte Cristo, fools. READ IT!
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