The first two panels are plain boring. Luck's arms are too long in the third panel and he looks odd in the fourth. The fourth and fifth panel I like a lot though, but in the last one Luck's head is too small. The page overall is okay I guess… if you don't count the number of useless panels. Also, I seem to have forgotten that someone in such situation might just run away instead of sitting there and waiting for it to happen. Especially when you find out some more information about her in later pages.
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