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Lucky number Nine - p8

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Lucky number Nine - p8

Ryjia
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The bush in the background looks worse than ever before, I want to kill it.
Well, Nine seems to have finally noticed something. Yet she still lets him that close.
I hate the way Nine looks in the second panel. Uch. It was supposed to be realisation downing on her, but it looks as if she has just seen Luck wearing a tutu…or her father. This page is boring, most of the shots are taken from the same angle it takes away the tension that's supposed to be present.

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