Doujinshi Improvement
Lucky number Nine - p12

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Lucky number Nine - p12

Ryjia
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I hate this page, my knowledge of anatomy is too limited to be doing action scenes like this one. The first two shots are boring and the last two just don't have any action at all. It's all wrong. Nine looks like she's falling over in the third panel too, uck.

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